I thought I have forgotten this
the blissful feelings
of soaring high, heaven nigh
the rushing of my blood
from the tip of my toe
to the top of my hood
Forgive me
all is too blur that it's becoming clear
too wrong it's becoming right
and when you are drawing near
all I face is a hopeless fight
and the countless of sleepless night.
Help me Dear
wake me up, head and nose up
don't let me drown and lose my crown
walk me to the light
help me win the fight
make everything right.....
New poem??? I love it. Love the rhyme.
ReplyDeleteYup,'fresh from the oven'. :) Thank you very much for liking. It's a spontaneous poem, a result from the very strong emotion I felt. Need to channel it out. Hehe...
ReplyDeleteBTW, do you still post new poems to the site you introduced me to...?
ReplyDeleteIt's been quite sometimes I didn't post there. Just feel uninspired lately. Don't know why.
ReplyDeleteYah, I saw that. Your last post was somewhere in Jan or Feb this year, right?
ReplyDeleteYeah..I think so. Cannot recall. Honestly, apart from feel uninspired lately, I kinda uninterested to surf it due to...so many poetry that I consider 'no quality'. Don't misunderstand me, I don't mean to judge other people as not talented. What I mean is..some of the members might be talented but, in order to achieve quantity they left out the quality. It makes me a bit bored and uninspired. So...I 'pause' for a while.
ReplyDeleteI think that's exactly the reason why the site is there, to grant opportunity to those amateur poets to present their works to the community. I guess the honest ones will give honest opinion, rate them according to their real quality.
ReplyDeleteWell, I stopped, and then posted again. Just for fun.
Ohh really. I will check it later then. A bit busy actually now...you know..completing the document I told you yesterday. The whole process is a bit 'cerewet'. It's 80% completed anyway.
ReplyDeleteOhh about the site, actually there is one member who keep on posting usually more than 3 poetry EVERYDAY. So, his name is the only one appear on the 'latest post'. This will push down other member's poetry and make it hidden. Actually I still remember one member who sarcastically (after a few times attempt to talk nicely) told him to stop being selfish. He said...'nak muntahlah asyik nama engkau jer kat latest post'. But the guy will never listen. Instead..he post another poetry to answer back the guy... Well...nothing to do with me...tapi ikut juga sa 'gerigitan' lah. Hahahaha
Btw..I will post there again someday. Right now betul betul tiada inspirasi ni.
Huh, that's sore. That person should be banned from the site. How about the quality of his poems? Are they good? Well, I think he should build his own website to accommodate his poems without annoying others.
ReplyDeleteOkay, will look forward for a new one from you.
Well..I think even the most famous and best poet in the world won't be able to produce a good poems if they have to finish more than 3 poems in one day right??? So....
ReplyDeleteOhhh, I had a quick surf of the site last night and I notice even the English Section Leader has not been sign in for quite a while. No new entry, no new monthly bulletin since february if I am not mistaken. I guess, he also feel uninspired lately. Hahahha.
That's what we call, 'kebanjiran idea'. Hehehe... Think he just wrote whatever jumbled words that crossed his mind, regardless of whether they have a meaning or not.
ReplyDeleteMaybe he's been busy, just like us. Or..yes, uninspired.